October Girl

Luna: Luna got up after a while. The headache was gone but the bruises stayed on her arms and legs. Luna looked at her fingers which is where she usually ...

Blood ripples; and pain pumps. Your veins all around, and your heart thumps. You don't feel, you cut yourself off. From emotion, from pain but mostly from me. You don't ...

Chelsea; Getting very angry and not being able to control yourself was Chelsea's problem. She remembered when she'd gotten so mad at her mom she her mothers cigarette sure it ...

Name:Chelsea Nicole Age:133.... Just kidding... Um 15. Race:Witch-Of fire Hair:Black Eyes:Blue Gender:Female Personality: Out going, fun, can relate to others, easy to talk to, easy to hang out, and n

No one said they didn't like it, you can't take it too personal if they did. You just need to spill out your heart on this piece of work and ...

Welcome to YWS, well first of all I agree with each and every person that has critiqued this .... Poem. Like some have said don't post more than one a ...

I didn't think it was bad at all, it was slow and flowing you didn't force anything you let it out on paper but I don't think that's the best ...

Luna knew she was at school but couldn't help herself, she pulled out a cigarette and lit it as she entered the girl's bathroom. She went to the sink and ...

Sadie; I went to my locker. I knew coming to school was a mistake I never fit in anywhere. I thought it would be best to leave the school and ...

Oh, my gosh! Why is it when someone writes about blood or death it automatically becomes emo?! I'm so sick of it! The poem was great, it had alot of ...

I'm in..... Name:Luna Age:16 Species:Witch Eyes:gray Hair:blond History: High level witch that can blow up anything and can feel people's pain, physically and emotionally. She manages it. After her mo

My heart was meant for you, I asked for you to break it in two. So you could have a piece and so could I. I'll love you until the ...

"I love you." So you say. "I love you." You say it everyday. "I love you." Do you even mean it in every way? "I love you." You even say ...

Sadie; I brushed passed the girl named Karen and left the gym. I heard someone talk but didn't turned around to see who. I left the four people in the ...

Damien; I stood out in the hall and the fire alarm went off, wonderful! Just wonderful! Everyone ran to the next exit and I didn't need to I was a ...